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From Sarah
« on: February 21, 2012, 11:53:07 pm »
chapter one

On a nice evening Louis and the boys were bored so they decided to check some fan mail at Louis and Harry’s place. As they sorted them into piles by boy Louis got bored and started opening his.
“Hey no fair Lou we have to sort and you get to read” Zayn teased
“Oh don’t worry I am doing very hard work over here” Louis said with a chuckle yet he was trying to sound as serious as possible. As Louis looked through the pile of over the top colorful envelopes he found one plain simple clean white one. On the front was printed in beautiful cursive handwriting Louis “tomo” Tomlinson and on the return address was written just a simple plain Sarah in print. Louis was enticed by this gorgeous envelope and beautiful writing so he knew that he had to read it. But as soon as he was about to open the seal on the envelope he was interrupted by a
“I am hungry” which came from Niall
“Of course you are Niall” Louis said with an eye role
“Why don’t we go out to McDonalds” suggested harry
“Sounds good” said Liam and off they went into the car. Once they all got burgers, Louis told the boys about the mysterious envelope.
“It was plain and white unlike any of the other envelopes but what normal envelopes look like.” He said “my name was written “Louis “tomo” Tomlinson” in the most beautiful cursive, calligraphy I have ever seen,, But what was odd about it was that instead of bolding and showing her name it was small and just her first name, small and printed not incursive just plain printed.” He explained.
“that actually sounds quiet cool” Liam said
“yeah I can’t wait to see whats inside I hope it is a gift certificatge to Nandos.” Niall joked even though all the boys knew that he was secretly wishing for it.
“ok well why don’t we get back to see what is inside” zayn said with excitement
“I call shot gun” harry yelled
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Re: From Sarah
« Reply #1 on: February 22, 2012, 10:16:58 pm »
Ooooooh a new story.... wow I loves it already :D

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Re: From Sarah
« Reply #2 on: February 22, 2012, 11:14:57 pm »
thanks sarah asked me to make one about her so I did and sorry the stories are coming slowely it is just that I have to type them up after I write them and really I am actually really far in all of them
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Re: From Sarah
« Reply #3 on: February 24, 2012, 11:11:39 pm »
I love it :) Thanks :* Im really enjoy for the next chapter ;)

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Re: From Sarah
« Reply #4 on: February 26, 2012, 07:32:38 pm »
 
Once they arrived at the house Louis headed straight for the counter where he thought he had put the letter. But it wasn’t there, where was it, this was terrible how could this have happened. After an hour of rummaging through all the fan mail and the trash bin, Louis thought to himself, what else could have happened to it. But after thinking of terrible things he suddenly remembered where he had put it. He ran to his bedroom and opened his drawer.
“I found it” Louis yelled from the bedroom
“Oh good where did you find it Lou” Zayn asked
“In my underwear drawer” he responded
“Really Louis we looked for an hour for something that was in your underwear drawer, this is a new crazy for Louis.” Liam announced jokingly
“Ok, ok, who cares just open it” Niall said jumping up and down.
 “ok here it goes” said Louis. He opened the letter very cautiously so careful not to rip the letter. He pulled it out and yelled to harry who was on go his laptop to go to Google translate.

“Harry it is in Slovak open Google translate now!” Louis demanded. Harry opened it as quickly as possible and Louis got translating. “Ok I am done” as the boys anxiously waited what was written in the note Niall ran to make popcorn. When Niall came back Louis stood of in front of everyone “it says, you are so awesome and you have a huge…” he was interrupted by harry saying
“that is fake what does it actually say?”
“ok fine “ Louis said “it says, Dear Louis, you are amazing, ever since the moment I first saw you audition for the x-factor I have loved you. When you got out at boot camp I cried more than anyone did and I cried so hard that I nearly passed out. After being put in the band I was worried that you wouldn’t be able to shine and show how amazing you are. But it turns out that it just improv3es your talent. Louis I love everything about you and hope that you get this message because you disserve all of these compliments. But since I believe that it is not right to give you all these compliments as a stranger so here are some facts about me that in no way were changed to fit any of the facts about you and if they do it is pure coincidence. My name is Sarah I am 20, I live in Slovakia in the boring country side in the middle of know where. I love chocolate and fashion. My favorite color is red and I like stripes. I look bad in toms and my family wants to buy a boat to sail across all the oceans. My favorite animal is a tiger and I am on the edge about carrots. I have 4 sisters and 1 brother who are all older and when I grow up I want to move out of here. I hope you read this and habe a charming evening/afternoon/night. Thanks you, for reading this and keep being you, love Sarah” Louis finished it was simple note he kept trying to tell himself but with a tear welling in his eye he knew that there was something special about it.
“wow that was quite a note” said Zayn
“yeah she seems really cool” Niall said
“ok well it is getting late I think I will be heading back to my place” Said Liam “good night see you tomorrow”
“yeah I think I will be doing the same, bye guys see you tomorrow” Zayn and Niall said.
“ok, bye guys’ Louis said as he shut the door behind them.
“wow Louis that was a really nice note” Harry commented
“yeah it was great” Louis said with a fake yawn followed by a “I think I am going to go to bed though I am very tired, see you tomorrow, Harry, good night.”
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Re: From Sarah
« Reply #5 on: March 07, 2012, 12:10:26 am »
chapter 3

Once Louis had finished getting ready for bed, he read the note over again. He was so moved and happy about the note that he started to tear up and realized that she was perfect for him and no matter what he was going to find her. The next morning after he woke up, Louis made his first step towards finding her and he found a program so that he could learn Slovak, that only took 8 months. Though Louis was excited he couldn’t wait that long so he also bought another program for learning. As soon as he got back he locked himself in his room and started practicing.
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After three months of the program and classes Louis was sure he had learned plenty, or enough to speak to her. He took the letter from his drawer where he had hidden it and wrote down the address of her house. After many concerts in Europe the boys were taking a break. Niall went back to Mullingar, Liam went back toWolverhampton, Harry went back to Cheshire, and Zayn stayed in London. Instead of going home Louis decided that this was his one big chance. He flew home to Doncaster and told his mom that he had to go, after some hugs and food he was on the plane again. This time he was flying to Slovakia
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Re: From Sarah
« Reply #6 on: March 10, 2012, 07:27:52 pm »
Chapter 4
After taking a cab, a bus, and ten another cab, Louis had finally made it to Sarah’s town and boy was she right it was a country side in the middle of know where but it was gorgeous. After asking a few people (10) where Sarah lived he finally found her house. As he walked up her front steps he turned around and say the beautiful view, of trees and flowers. He got to the top of the stairs and rang the doorbell but he heard nothing not even the doorbell ringing inside. So he decided to knock. Once he had knocked twice a woman opened the door. Once she looked up to see his face, her face went into pure shock.
]Ahoj, volám sa Louis” he said (hello my name is Louis)
Viem, moja dcéra ťa miluje” she said(I know my daughter loves you)
Môžem sa opýtať ako sa voláte?” he said (may I ask your name?)
Oh, prepáč je to odomna hnusné, volám sa Anna]” she said (oh how rude of me my name is Anna)
Rád vás spoznávam, je Sára doma ?he said (it is so nice to meet you is Sarah home?)
Nie, je mi to ľúto je práve v škole ale prosím môžeš ísť dovnútra a počkať na ňu pokiaľ príde.” Anna said (no I am sorry she is at school right now but please come in and waits till she arrives)
Oh, ďakujem
” he said as he entered (oh why thank you)
Takže čo ťa privádza aby si sa stretol so Sarah? ” she asked (so what brings you here to meet Sarah?)
čítal som jej fanmail a chcel som sa sňou stretnúť” he told her, then the phone rang. (I read her fan mail and needed to meet her)
]“ahoj” anna said as she picked up the phone.(Hello)
Bože, hneď som tu...” she replied(oh my I will be right there)
"je mi to skutočne ľúto , moja dcéra je v nemocnici, spadla zo schodov a rozbila si hlavu.” Anna said to Louis (I am so sorry would you like to come, my daughter is in the hospital she tripped down the stairs) and cracked her head open.)
"To je hrozné !” Louis said grabbing his coat" (oh that is terrible)
« Last Edit: March 10, 2012, 07:39:41 pm by 1D123 »
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