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The Way We Came To Be (mainly Louis fanfic)


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Hey everybody this is my first fanfic, so please dont hate! Please please please comment what you think though (only positive things)! I hope you enjoy it, and let me know if i should keep posting! P.S Yes Tyler is a girl, and my name is Tyler but my last name isnt the same as the charcter. Setting: New York City

 

Tyler's POV.

 

  "Bye girls!" I say as my friends and I part different ways. I turn around and suddenly hot steaming liquid is spilled all over me! I look down to see coffee stains all on my white lace shirt. Then I look up to meet the most beautiful crystal blue eyes I've ever seen on a boy. "I'm so sorry! I didnt mean to spill my latte on you!" he said wiht the cutest British accent ever! I was annoyed but mesmorized with him. " Umm here let me help you," he says trying to dab his napkin on the bottom of my shirt. "Oh no it's f-fine. My flat is right here I'll just go change," I say. "Well I have to make it up to you somehow! My name is Louis," he said with an outstreched hand.  " Tyler. The name is Tyler, and please I promise you I will be ok. You don't need to go through all that trouble of making it up to me!" I exclaimed while shaking his hand, but secretly I wouldnt mind spending some more time with him. "Oh love I insist! Give me your number, so I can take you out one night!" he tells me. I reach in my purse and pull out my business card, "Here this is my business card. You can calll either number." I said and handed it to him. He took it and stuck it in his wallet. "I would give you my number,b ut unfortunatly I do not have a business card!" he said. " That's ok. I really mus go now for i will be late if i dont go!" i tell him. "Of course! I will call you later to set up arragements, because I'm not letting this go!" he said and laughed. "Ok ok ... well txt me" i say waving goodbye heading  up tto my flat to change. "Bye!" Louis says. I unlock the door, step in , and then shut it. "Wow!" I breathed remembering his beautiful eyes...

 

Please let me know I have alot planned including Louis POV. I have pre written the chapters! so what do you think and should I post more? Thanks! :)


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This is really good so far! and cute :P luv it!

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Thank you! I will probalby have the next Chapter up here tonight! As soon as i get it typed of course...


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aww this is cute!  Post more soon!


My ass is on the line! ~Harry, This Is Us

I don't even like One Direction!  They're crap! ~Niall, This Is Us

I've got One Direction for you...and that's to the lounge!  You're safe. ~Ryan Seacrest to Alex Preston on the American Idol voting results

 

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Chapter 2:

 

Louis's POV.

 

Holy Crap! She's hot! I got her number too! Mind blown! I thought to myself. A shiny black car across the street where I stood honked its horn and rolled down the window. I saw I blonde haired familar fellow with sunglasses on wave me over. I walked across the busy New York City street when no cars were coming. I approached the car and said "Hey Nialler! What's up?". "Nothing really. I saw you spilled coffee all over that girl, and then she gave you what I assume to be her number? Hmm?" he questions me in that Irish accent of his taking off his glasses and curiously looks me in the eyes. I sigh and walk over to the passenger door of his car and get in. "Well yes I got her number because I felt bad for spilling my latte on her," i said. "What's the girl's name?" he asked me. i look foward picturing her beautiful face and say "Tyler, her name is Tyler,". I then pull out her business card she gave me and handed it tol Niall. " Tyler Tate founder of the Tate Collection clothing line! Dude her clothes for men are sick! Did you know that she owned that company?" he asks in disbelief. I loook at Niall with my eyes wide open. "Oh my God! No way! Dude I love Tate Outfitters!" I say and take back the card to read over her job title. "Wait you know what? Put your seat belt on I've got to see something that might also shock you!" he says. " Wait"! I glance over to her flat ,and she is getting in a cab wiht a new top on. "Crap I bet she had to waste money on a cab,b ecause I made her late!" i say. "Chill dude just ut your seatbelt on," Niall says.  I'm still staring at the card in disbelief as I put on my seatbelt. Niall starts to drive then I have a realisation. "Oh no! I spilled my coffee all over Tyler Tate! THE Miss Tate!!!" I whine with shame. Niall bursts out laughing! "Oh oh man that's so sad! Haha i cant believe that happened!" he said dying with laughter. We pulled up in front of the Broadway Theatre, and got out. I look up at the marki it reads: LAST PERFORMANCE OF THE BROADWAY SHOWING OF BURLESQUE STARRING TYLER TATE.  "She's on Broadway?" I ask. Dang what all has this girl not done! " I thought so. My girlfriend Sara loves this movie and wanted to see the Broadway show." Niall says staring at the marki. "I'm soo going! Come on Niall you can take Sara. I've just got ot surprise her by me going." I say to him. "Ok dude let's go get tthe tickets," he says. We walk up to the girl at the ticket booth. "How may I help you lads today?" she asks. "Yes I would like three tickets to the final showing of Burlesque tonight." I say. "Woah hold on Louis I can buy Sara and I's tickets. I'm not broke." he says pulling me bakc a little on my shoulder. "Dude dont sweat it. You gladly agreed to go with me and take Sara therefore I shall buy the tickets!" i tell him. "Whatever.. Thanks man," he says. i pull out the money and gives it to the girl. She gives me hte tickets and I had two to Niall. AS we are walking back to his car I see in the Final Showing Display a picture of her. She has a short cute blonde wig with bangs on and a sparkly costume, and she is looking off in the distance. It reads at the top of the display BURLESQUE and at the bottom it reads   TYLER TATE. Niall catches me staring at the photo and says "Man you are head over heels for her! Now come on I'm starving!" I turn my attention back to him and start wlaking to the car. 'Your always starving man!" I say laughing.

 

Comment Please espiclally if I should post more


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U should for sure post more its REALLY good

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Thanks! Its getting late though therefore i will post tomorrow morning! :)


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Yah almost 11:00 kk tty ppl later im going to sleep

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i just woke up lolz its half eight in the morning aaannddd SNOWING where I am.

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Where r u? The states?

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no england lolz

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like birmingham kind of area. my friends dad works with liams dad and she met liam!!!!

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like birmingham kind of area. my friends dad works with liams dad and she met liam!!!!

Whoa!  Your friend is SOOOO lucky!!!  I'm from the states, so no one has connections to the guys. lol


My ass is on the line! ~Harry, This Is Us

I don't even like One Direction!  They're crap! ~Niall, This Is Us

I've got One Direction for you...and that's to the lounge!  You're safe. ~Ryan Seacrest to Alex Preston on the American Idol voting results

 

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someone in my class says her bffs cousin is zayn.

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AAAAAAAAHHHHHHH all these connections to 1D!!!!! *dies*


My ass is on the line! ~Harry, This Is Us

I don't even like One Direction!  They're crap! ~Niall, This Is Us

I've got One Direction for you...and that's to the lounge!  You're safe. ~Ryan Seacrest to Alex Preston on the American Idol voting results

 

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Chapter 3 coming soon everybody!!


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Yay
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