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The Notebook~A Louis Fanfic


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I lOve the story

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Huh oh no I meant why did Caitlyn say lol?

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idk

i cant remember

i have horrible memory


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Ahhh!!! Iam confused

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Yea me too!
Expecially why my mean phone keeps posting twice!
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my cats just spilled something!


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Iam a dog person I have 3!

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i have 2 cats(but one's not nessicarily ours) and a dog


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So here is Chapter 3.
Hope you like it!!!
Danielle's P.O.V
When me and Zoey got to the restaurant we were left wide-eyed, the restaurant was beautiful. There were chandeliers very high up in the ceiling, it was made up of 2 floors, the staircase was very beautiful.

"I'm glad you girls could make it" Zayn greeted us.

"Why would we ever miss this" Zoey said in a very flirtactious way.

"Well we're glad you girls could be here" Liam said.

I was about to speak when I heard a very squeky voice right behind me, and I could have sworn I saw Niall give the girl a very dirty look. I turned around to what might have been the worst thing I could have ever done, there in front of me Louis arm around the one and only DONICA, yeah his EX-girlfriend. There were tears forming in my eyes, I know that Louis probably didnt remember me and he probably forgot about that girl (me) who went from being his punching buddy to that girl that he couldn't stand to be without. Before I could let my tears run wild she spoke.

"So you to are the new girls that the boys were talking about" she asked.

"Yup" Zoey said popping the "p", I just nodded.

She just shook her head and then we all just sat down. The waitress came over and asked us if we were ready to order. Liam told her that we were still expecting one more person.

"Isn't 11 enough, I better be getting a huge tip" she mumbled under her breath.

I let out small giggle and everyone turned to look at me, including the waitress, she looked very pale.

"Ummm...what's so funny" Louis asked.

"N-nothing"I said

"No Dani, pleasa tell us we wanna laugh too" Zayn said.

"Really its nothing, I just remembered an old joke"

"Thats what everyone says" Donica growled.

"Really it wa

"Hello everyone, sorry I'm late" Simon Cowell said, interrupting me.

Wait, why is Simon Cowell here? I'm totally confused right now. Before I could drive myself crazy the boys all spoke. But I could tell Zoey was feeling the same way.

"Its alright Simon" Louis, Harry, Zayn and Niall all said at once.

"Oh, It's alright uncle Simon" Liam said.

"UNCLE" Zoey and I yelled.

"Yes 'uncle', Liam is my nephew" Simon replied.

"But how come he is Liam Payne and not Cowell" I asked

"I'm his mothers brother, so if he also had his mothers maiden name he would be Liam Payne Cowell"

"Okay" I replied.

After we were done clearing up the whole thing Zoey started fangirling. Simon Cowell was one of her idols, especially since he can can tell you the truth straight up, something she could not do.

"So girls the boys tell me you are new here" Simon asked us.

"Yeah we live in the same neighborhood" I said.

"Thats vey nice, so what brings you 2 to England?"

"We are gonna be attending London's Academy of arts" Zoey said.

"Oh I see, so are you girls gonna be attending it with a full scholarship?"

"Yes" I said

"Thats a very tough school to get into, especially on a full scholarship, so if you dont mind me asking what do you girls do" He asked.

"I dance and Dani sings, Dani has many talents but she doesn't do them anymore"

"What kind of talents" Louis asked.

I could tell Zoey knew that I wouldn't be comfortable saying it so she said it for me.

"Well she used to play piano like an adult, she used to dance like a professional dancer, she used to draw like Leonardo Da Vinci, and she used to model" Zoey said.

"Thats Alot of talents"Niall said.

Before anyone could say anything else the waitress came back with our dinner. After 9 small bites I didn't have the appetiate to eat. I started looking around the room and noticed a piano a the back of the room. I used to love to play the piano it was the only thing that could bring me back to realitiy when I was feeling down or when I was just lost in my own little world.



Louis P.O.V

I couldn't take my eyes off Dani, she just looked so broken, but other than that everything about her seemed so familiar, and the fact that she didn't do all those things that she loved reminded me of someone that was very special in my life and still is but I just can't put my finger to it. But that wasnt the only reason I couldn't take my eyes off her, she was very beautiful. Her smile was amazing, her eyes shined like there were made out of diamonds, her voice was like I wa listening to an angel speak and...okay Louis snap out of it you have a girlfriend. I just can't help it, I sneak a peek at her and realize that she is eyeing the piano in the back. I guess piano was one of the things that she loved the most out of all thise talents that she has going on. Right here and right now I will make a promise to myself..... I Louis William Tomlinson promise to find out why this beautiful girl doesn't do all the things that she loves anymore and I am determinded to make her love those things again and I also promise to make this beautiful, amazing girl happy again. Thats the promise I'm making to myself and to her, but mostly to her.

If i let you know i'm here for you

Maybe you'll love yourself like i love you.

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i've lost myself. idunno what i'm doing anymore. i promised myself i would never be that girl, but i guess some promises were meant to be broken. i wanna stop hiding. i want someone to listen, to hold me close and tell me everything will be okay. i just wanna go back to being the girl that didn't care. i wanna go back to being the that wouldn't pick at her skin, the girl who wouldn't hit her arm to make the pain go away. i wanna love myself again….

 


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LOVE IT!!!

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Love it. Plz post soon.

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LETS SCREAM AND SHOUT AND LET IT ALL OUT
Lets eat and nandoes and eat it all up-Niall would say

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LOL.
I'll try to post two more chapters tomorrow.

If i let you know i'm here for you

Maybe you'll love yourself like i love you.

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i've lost myself. idunno what i'm doing anymore. i promised myself i would never be that girl, but i guess some promises were meant to be broken. i wanna stop hiding. i want someone to listen, to hold me close and tell me everything will be okay. i just wanna go back to being the girl that didn't care. i wanna go back to being the that wouldn't pick at her skin, the girl who wouldn't hit her arm to make the pain go away. i wanna love myself again….

 


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